The Official Writing Challenge
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Your mc really had lived a life of pretense. You presented her dilemma well and made the reader want her family to accept her past lovingly.
08/23/08
Very good! You're a good writer--my only suggestion is to use your full allotment of 750 words, so you can develop your plot or your characters ever further. I can't wait to read more of your work.