The Official Writing Challenge
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You've presented a good testimony about giving God your secrets and letting Him change you, while encouraging others to do the same.
08/23/08
Nice conversational tone in this touching testimony.

I'd suggest smaller paragraphs, for the sake of your readers. One tiny FYI: you wanted "sought" instead of "seeked".

I like the acronym you came up with for "SHAM." Clever!