The Official Writing Challenge
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You've presented a good testimony about giving God your secrets and letting Him change you, while encouraging others to do the same.
Nice conversational tone in this touching testimony.

I'd suggest smaller paragraphs, for the sake of your readers. One tiny FYI: you wanted "sought" instead of "seeked".

I like the acronym you came up with for "SHAM." Clever!