The Official Writing Challenge
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07/11/05
I liked this.
07/12/05
I liked reading about "the first time" experience. It's awesome isn't it!
God bless ya, littlelight
07/13/05
Very nice memory tied with a very good lesson :)
07/15/05
Nice thought, especially the parallel to God's love. Get control (eliminate) of some of the adverbs and the piece will improve greatly.
Treasures galore amidst brokenness - this is truly real life, isn't it??
08/04/05
I LOVE the metaphor!
Oh, Katharine, what delightful imagery! Beautifully written!