The Official Writing Challenge
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Your devotional piece is very challenging, as well as convicting.
Your first paragraph was very strong, with your illustration of the "Larry the Cable Guy" phone message. It made me really want to move on.

I wonder if something went wrong with the submission process? You have several paragraphs that are repeated.

Good words of warning--thanks!
The Message of this article is great. I Like it. But like Jan, I'm a little puzzeled at the repetition. Is it deliberate? If so I think a little overdone. Kind of 'rubbing it in'. there's an old saying, 'Softly, softly catchee monkey.'
Keep writing.