The Official Writing Challenge
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Your devotional piece is very challenging, as well as convicting.
08/22/08
Your first paragraph was very strong, with your illustration of the "Larry the Cable Guy" phone message. It made me really want to move on.

I wonder if something went wrong with the submission process? You have several paragraphs that are repeated.

Good words of warning--thanks!
The Message of this article is great. I Like it. But like Jan, I'm a little puzzeled at the repetition. Is it deliberate? If so I think a little overdone. Kind of 'rubbing it in'. there's an old saying, 'Softly, softly catchee monkey.'
Keep writing.