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08/21/08
Wow! She was definitely in for a surprise here. Experience is certainly required for this job. Interesting way to approach the topic and good job with setting and atmosphere.
08/21/08
LOL. Been there, done that. Chasing "B" down the hall to try to get his diaper changed....trying to get "P" into the shower without getting punched....it's one thing to think you can help someone out in that way; quite another to do it! :)
08/22/08
Good job of portraying a terrible situation!

I'm curious--if the man was nearly naked, in an adult crib, how was it apparent that he was a former professional of some sort?

Glad that your protagonist was rescued...hope she learned her lesson!
08/25/08
really enjoyed this can definitely say been there done that.