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08/21/08
What a different twist on this old story! Nice job! I wasn't sure who was who until finally mid-way I 'got it' good job there! This is a new look at this! ^_^
08/21/08
This was fun. I liked the witty commentary on the actions and words of different disciples. :)
08/22/08
I enjoyed this! What a great twist on an old story!
08/23/08
A revealing look at Doubting Thomas's motives and feelings.

I'm not sure why you modernized the names, as the rest of the story is set in Biblical times. It threw me a little bit.

I really enjoy speculative Biblical fiction, and this is a good one.
I feel that humanising The Word is fun but can also quickly bring in 'false witness.'

You do good here though!


Peace