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What a different twist on this old story! Nice job! I wasn't sure who was who until finally mid-way I 'got it' good job there! This is a new look at this! ^_^
This was fun. I liked the witty commentary on the actions and words of different disciples. :)
I enjoyed this! What a great twist on an old story!
A revealing look at Doubting Thomas's motives and feelings.

I'm not sure why you modernized the names, as the rest of the story is set in Biblical times. It threw me a little bit.

I really enjoy speculative Biblical fiction, and this is a good one.
I feel that humanising The Word is fun but can also quickly bring in 'false witness.'

You do good here though!