The Official Writing Challenge
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08/21/08
That is a neat line "keep the sugar sweet" it works well as your title and certainly fits this piece. Thanks for sharing, the transparency in here is wonderful! ^_^
Ok, I'll guess the word! Is it "pissant" or "pissmire"? It may be used sometimes vulgarly but it sure brings the picture alive for me. God does use strange things sometimes to get our attention. Thank you for giving us a glimpse into your inner world!
08/23/08
Good job!

I would have loved a whole story based purely on your third paragraph, which really appealed to the "wordie" in me.