The Official Writing Challenge
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Love your last paragraph! This is a bittersweet story, but there is hope at the end and I like that. Thanks so much for sharing this! ^_^
I am appreciating your vulnerability in sharing your experience and the process God took and is taking you through. You've expressed it quite eloquently as well. Good job!!!
Beautiful! Just beautiful!
08/22/08
This was very well written and spoke so clearly to me. I believe we all have masks at some point in our lives. I've been revealing pieces of the real me lately and to my surprise the world hasn't stopped spinning.
08/23/08
Very moving testimony--thanks for sharing it.

I wonder if it'd be clearer if you stayed with one metaphor--either the wall or a mask.

So glad that you've found healing and restoration!
You wrote this much too convincingly. I hope this isn't your story, but if so, I'm glad you (or your MC) found healing from the real Healer. Good writing!
Congratulations, dear sister o' mine!!! Number 10 in ranking! Way to go!!! Woohoo! I am busting my buttons with admiration & pride over your accomplishment! Praise God for enabling you to share with words what he has done in your life!!!
08/29/08
That was lovely! I could find no fault with your presentation and your content provided a sweet look at our kinsman Redeemer that loves sincerely having no illusions and soothingly encourages the release of our props so our hands can be free to hold His.
02/11/10
I can so identify with this article. So glad you have escaped from that life. God is so truly good.