The Official Writing Challenge
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08/21/08
Oooh, ach, the humiliation! There's irony in here, lol. I could feel for this MC and the awkward moment and then the laughter. You did well with atmosphere! ^_^
08/23/08
Very funny!
08/24/08
I enjoyed the entertaining way you told this humiliating story. Good writing.