The Official Writing Challenge
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Awww! What a sweet, short story! I love it! Especially the ending and how she was able to take off that mask and take hold of His hand. ^_^
Interesting short story. It left me curious about what the shame and embarrasment was from.
I enjoyed the story and especially the last paragraph.
A well written reminder of what we all should remember. I like the way you voiced the Father's love.
Lovely and sweet.
Reminds me of Hinds Feet on High Places. Wouldn't it be wonderful to hear God's audible voice at those times of greatest heartbreak? You captured that nicely.
As I read your story I felt a sense of peace come over me. Your second paragraph drew me into the embrace of the one speaking.