The Official Writing Challenge
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08/21/08
Awww! What a sweet, short story! I love it! Especially the ending and how she was able to take off that mask and take hold of His hand. ^_^
08/21/08
Interesting short story. It left me curious about what the shame and embarrasment was from.
I enjoyed the story and especially the last paragraph.
A well written reminder of what we all should remember. I like the way you voiced the Father's love.
08/23/08
Lovely and sweet.
08/25/08
Reminds me of Hinds Feet on High Places. Wouldn't it be wonderful to hear God's audible voice at those times of greatest heartbreak? You captured that nicely.
08/27/08
As I read your story I felt a sense of peace come over me. Your second paragraph drew me into the embrace of the one speaking.