The Official Writing Challenge
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Your words are almost poetic. Some wonderful thoughts. If you split this up into more paragraphs, it would be easier to read. Best wishes with this piece. You have a great start.
Yes you are still YOU !Beautifully and wonderfully made!
Thank you for sharing this.
Yeshua Bless
this was beautiful like a train travelling through the different ages of our life. thank you. God Bless You
I think broken up into two paragraphs would make an esier read too. It made me stop and think for I often think we see only the surface of people. Sometimes, we forget to look a little closer, judge a little less. This touches your heart.
We should all see each other in the manner you spoke of. God bless you.
Beautifully written and heartfelt.