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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Anger (01/24/05)

TITLE: When You Look At Me SEE ME
By tammy crowell
01/24/05


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I feel all mumbly and jumbly I wish that I could just go and hide. Because of my health I can't talk I long for the time when I could go for a walk. I hear people saying things always talking about me, She did this or She did that, can't they just drop it and leave it be. My body may not work like it did my mind and memory seem to have been hid. Whenyou look at me please SEE ME. I am a young child just going to school I feel so grown up, boy I'm so cool. I am a teenager just falling in love wandering is he my true love? I am a wife at twenty, a Mother at twenty two and three, all my beautiful children hang around my knee. My children are grown and have children of hteir own. We are grandparents my husband and me now we have grandchildren on our knees. My husband is gone and I 'm here alone I wonder when will my life be done? So when you look at me , see me, see me for who I am not what my body has become, I AM STILL ME!!


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Karen O'Leary01/31/05
Your words are almost poetic. Some wonderful thoughts. If you split this up into more paragraphs, it would be easier to read. Best wishes with this piece. You have a great start.
Karen
Deena Walls02/01/05
Yes you are still YOU !Beautifully and wonderfully made!
Norma OGrady02/01/05
Thank you for sharing this.
Yeshua Bless
MILENA ASSENOVA02/02/05
this was beautiful like a train travelling through the different ages of our life. thank you. God Bless You
donna robinson02/02/05
I think broken up into two paragraphs would make an esier read too. It made me stop and think for I often think we see only the surface of people. Sometimes, we forget to look a little closer, judge a little less. This touches your heart.
Deborah Anderson02/05/05
We should all see each other in the manner you spoke of. God bless you.
darlene hight02/06/05
Beautifully written and heartfelt.