The Official Writing Challenge
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08/15/08
Powerful words to describe the lost condition. good rhyming. Nicely done. Keep writing.
08/17/08
[Do you hide, all your life, in a
desolate cave
and refuse to come out, in the light?
Does your attitude say "I can't
do this right now
so I'll just stay right here
in the night."?]

Loved that part.

Good work!

May God bless.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship


Congratulations on your highly commended, Brenda. Good work!