The Official Writing Challenge
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08/14/08
Oh, yes... so many of us try to hide from our sin, don't we. Thank you for writing this.
08/14/08
Great take on the subject! That was wonderful. I loved everything about it. Thank you.
08/15/08
Oh, this was so good! You really caught was it is to be a child and to have childish thinking. I enjoyed it!
08/17/08
Very nice. Loved the dialogue - it was completely believable.

May God bless and keep you writing such wonderful work.


Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship

Excellent writing on topic and congratulations on your win!
08/21/08
Brought back memories of my own childhood and hiding from my punishment. Only I would have gotten double whippings - once for the cookie and one for hiding. Great job on expressing a child's fear and emotions. Congrats on your 2nd place! Move on up to level 2. :) Cat
Nice writing all around. I especially enjoyed returning to my own childhood woes. You also showed how we all no matter the age try to hide from our sins. Congratulations on your win.
08/21/08
I absolutely loved this one...congratulations.