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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Hide and Seek (08/07/08)

TITLE: Perfect Peace
By Leah Nichols
08/07/08


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Waves beat against the shore. Branches rustle as the wind pushes them back and forth, back and forth. One hundred yards out, a seagull drifts along the surface of the water, as another flies overhead, chanting his anxious cry. Majestic blue peaks rise from the horizon, as the brilliant fire of the setting sun lights the sky. A beautiful summer's eve, and in this moment I feel a simple peace.

“Mommy, Mommy! Look at the boat!” The world through a three-year-old's eyes – so enchanted by simplicities of life. I gather her into my arms, and her little hands reach around my neck as she presses her cheek to my shoulder. She freely gives me her love, and I relish in the delight of being the hero of her young life.

“Look, Mommy!” a hand points upwards excitedly. I raise my eyes and see the evening star as it shines above in the still-darkening sky.

“Wish upon a star,” I whisper into the little ear, kissing her cheek.

“I want Daddy to come home,” she states simply. The star blurs in my vision as my heart leaps nearly out of my chest at the mention of his name. I quickly bring my hand to wipe away tears that slip down my cheek.

I pull her closer to my body and begin to shower her with kisses. “Me too, baby girl. Me too.”

As she breathes in and out slowly half an hour later, tucked under the covers of her trundle bed, I run my fingers across the delicate cheek and whisper “I love you” before tip-toeing out the door. As I close it behind me, I lean against the wall and let the tears trickle down freely.

Iraq is so far away! A telephone call once every two weeks, an email maybe three times a week or maybe not for a month, but never his strong arms to hold me when I crave his presence. Why, God? My silent prayer rises from my heart. It always seems to me as if my prayers must hit the ceiling and stop there.

I make myself ready for bed and crawl under the covers. The large black Bible lies on the nightstand next to his side of the bed. For some reason I want to read it tonight. I reach over and take it off the nightstand, flipping through the pages. What can I find that will comfort my aching and anxious mind?

My eyes look down to read a phrase, a promise really. Isaiah 26:3 – “You will keep him in perfect peace, whose mind is stayed on You, because he trusts in You.” What does that mean, Lord? My heart cries out. I crave that heart of peace in the midst of the aching and the longing.

Could it be that I have been seeking the peace I long for outside of the Source? I have not kept my mind “stayed” on God, trusting in Him for the safety of my husband who fights for freedom halfway across the world in the midst of innumerable dangers. Even if he should give his life, would that peace remain steadfast despite great loss?

Perfect peace. PERFECT peace. What would that look like?

Delighting in the beauty and the wonderful blessings of this life. Relishing in the beauty of a brilliant sunset, soaking in the hug of the most beautiful three-year-old in the world, thanking God His faithful love that transcends even the love of a most honorable man. Observing God's hand in every moment of my life; allowing the spontaneous worship to rise up in my heart – God, You are GOOD!

It is not a secret that has been hidden away, but rather written across the pages of the Word. It is simply that my eyes have not seen it until this moment. Yes, I want that perfect peace.

I fold the Bible and leave it on his side of the bed. Turning off the light, I lay my head on the pillow and begin to thank my Lord for His peace. Thank You for beauty, thank You for love, thank You for hope, thank You for life....Jesus, You meet my every need. You give me everything for which I have sought....

Tonight my rest will be sweet, as I will find the longings of my soul.


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Racheal Chand08/14/08
The first few words of this story set a standard. I knew this was going to be a good one. Our comfort zones are so spoiled now that we at times forget to be thankful. A very good reality check. Thank you. Great job with the description. I imagined it all.
Yvonne Blake 08/14/08
Ahhh..the peace of God, what could be better than that? Thank you for writing this.
Renee Huff08/15/08
Nicely written. A topic many readers can relate to.
Patricia Turner08/16/08
An absolutely beautiful story. I'm so glad she found the peace she was seeking from the right and perfect Source. Excellent writing, please keep it up!
Dan Blankenship 08/17/08
All I can say is wow. Writing such as this is why Faithwriters is the place for new Christian writers to join.

Thanks for an excellent entry! Loved every word of this one.

May God bless.
Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship

Joshua Janoski08/18/08
This piece is beautifully written and it has a beautiful message.

Your descriptions were wonderful, and the internal dialogue of your MC was also really good.

Definitely hoping to see this one place this week, because it is great writing, filled with a great spiritual message.

Julie Seeto08/20/08
This really touched my heart. Such beautiful writing that expresses your MC's feelings: "I crave that heart of peace in the midst of the aching and the longing."
And your lesson on PERFECT peace - isn't that just like God - He knows the right words to give us at just the right time. Great writing. I'm so glad you've joined Faithwriters - I'd like to read more of your work.