The Official Writing Challenge
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08/14/08
I really enjoyed this. You captured it perfectly and made a very interesting read. Good Job.
08/14/08
Well done! I thought of going with this idea too, but used another one. You did a great job with rhythm and rhyme. thank you for writing this.
08/15/08
A very enjoyable poem. Remember to keep the beat with every line. Adding too many words in one line can take it off beat.
08/15/08
This really gave me a new perspective on the age old story of the Fall. I enjoyed reading it very much!
I think you gave us a good sense of the emotions of Adam on that day. Nice job, and keep on writing.
08/17/08
Excellent and fun to read...

Keep up the good work.

May God bless.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship