The Official Writing Challenge
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08/14/08
It was good. I noticed one error, but it didn't take from the story. Keep up the good work.
08/14/08
ooooh...that would go through my head too! I like your descriptions. I could "see" the darkness. Well done.
Good suspense and a cute story. Just double check your spelling here and there, and please keep on writing!
I like how you built suspense with this one. I was on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happened next.