The Official Writing Challenge
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08/07/08
Great ending.. this would make a great devotional..
Wow! What a wonderful message. I enjoyed the way the story is intertwined with the last paragraph. Good job with descriptions. You have a talent for writing devotionals. Great job!
08/08/08
Well written and extremely thought-provoking. You brought these characters to life with rich details and descriptions that held my interest throughout the story. The ending was especially beautiful. Keep Writing!
I love the changes you made. They really brought the story to life! You may have found your creative outlet! I look forward to the next story!
"No, Mom, I wasn't looking down."

To me, this is the crux of the story! Loved it. Great devotional material. Few words, great message.
08/11/08
Ah... what a great message! I love covered bridges. They make me feel like I'm walking back in time.
Great story!
08/13/08
In the top ten FOR SURE.

Loved the title, the work, and the words.


Thanks for taking the time to write this.

There are a LOT of good entries this week.


Hope you place high with this one.


May God bless!

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship