The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow. I loved this. It is great, great, great. Very creative. I was swinging my legs and hearing the gurgling water right along w/ the girls and then BAM! you hit me with the REAL purpose of the bridge. Good job!
08/11/08
Ah...friendship is so great! I like how you included us in the secrets between the friends and the sharing of the new "bridge" at the end.
08/12/08
What a sweet story. I love that they came back to the bridge to share the most important experience of all. Wonderful.
Your descriptive words drew the setting and characters clearly. Very nice. :)
The way you painted the picture of these friends and their special "meeting place" is great. I love how you show them sharing everything that is important, holding nothing and no one back from each other.

Thank you
Wow! Really good work!

May God bless.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship