The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow. I loved this. It is great, great, great. Very creative. I was swinging my legs and hearing the gurgling water right along w/ the girls and then BAM! you hit me with the REAL purpose of the bridge. Good job!
08/11/08
Ah...friendship is so great! I like how you included us in the secrets between the friends and the sharing of the new "bridge" at the end.
08/12/08
What a sweet story. I love that they came back to the bridge to share the most important experience of all. Wonderful.
Your descriptive words drew the setting and characters clearly. Very nice. :)
The way you painted the picture of these friends and their special "meeting place" is great. I love how you show them sharing everything that is important, holding nothing and no one back from each other.

Thank you
08/13/08
Wow! Really good work!

May God bless.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship