The Official Writing Challenge
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08/11/08
Ah.... beautiful! I've dreamed of living on an island. We live on the coast of Maine and can see many islands from here. Where do you live?
I suggest that you leave an extra space between paragraphs to make it easier for the readers.
I love your ending poem.
08/13/08
You did a wonderful job of sharing how God heard your pray and answered. He is always faithful. I appreciate how you give Him praise with your poem.
08/13/08
Very nice.

A joy to read.

May God bless.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship