The Official Writing Challenge
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08/07/08
Great job. You correlated the two fathers well. Your point was well made. Thank you for a good read.
08/09/08
This is an interesting analogy. You 'painted' a vivid picture at the beginning. I was a bit confused as to who the strangers were, but I'm glad you explained about the father.
Well done.
08/13/08
Excellent entry! Very well written and an enjoyable read.

May God bless.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship

08/13/08
Excellent entry! Very well written and an enjoyable read.

May God bless.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship

08/13/08
Oops.


I have no idea why that went on twice.

Sorry!