The Official Writing Challenge
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08/09/08
A very good story. I like the descriptions, but it might be a little more stronger with dialogue or action.
This has a wonderful message.
08/13/08
I talked to Will more than Jacob that day. Will told me that people beat themselves up with their own minds. He told me,‘I may not walk fast, but as long as I can walk, I will walk.’


Very good!

Nice entry. Fun to read.

May God bless.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship