The Official Writing Challenge
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08/09/08
Ah... what a wonderful ending! I'm glad you were able to 'bridge' the gap between you.
If you put an extra space between paragraphs, it makes it easier for the readers.
Thank you for writing this.
08/11/08
Excellent entry.

It would have read a little easier with an extra space between the paragraphs, but other than that, I loved it.


May God continue to bless your work.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship