The Official Writing Challenge
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08/07/08
Very creatively written! How great it must be to actually walk in the places where Paul lived and preached. I'd also like to go to Israel someday.
I would have liked more..telling why you were there and what you saw while you were there.
Thank you for writing this.
That sounds like it would be such a cool trip to take. I hope to get to go there someday.

I too would have liked to know more. It would be cool if you took this and expanded on it to explain even mroe about your adventures and discoveries in Rome. However, you did a great job of conveying your message in the amount of words that you did use. Thank you for sharing! :)
Congratulations on placing #13 in the top 15 of your level, Alica. I hope you keep entering the challenge. :)
08/16/08
Great message and title, I could feel your enthusiasm. Count me among those who would like to have known more about what was going on, read more description, and read more story to go with your excellent message. Don't be afraid to use up those 750 words. ;-)

Welcome to FaithWriters. I'll be looking forward to more stories.