The Official Writing Challenge
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08/10/08
Good column. The only thing wrong, in my view, is that you waited too long to tie in a message to the bridge collapse. You should have made little comments here and there that tied in the life-changing events of the bridge collpasing to the life-changing decision to know Jesus sooner.

In other words, the ending felt rushed.

But other than that, very nice work.

May God bless.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship