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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Beach (07/04/05)

TITLE: The Ocean
By Kimberly Py
07/05/05


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I love the ocean. It is so gray and salty and filled with fish. I can swim in the ocean as long as I donít go too far out into the sea. There are many names for the ocean that surrounds the personís country. The name of the sea that is close to my hometown is The Gulf of Mexico. I can see it from Galveston, Texas. I was born there, had my kids there, and my brother and I were also born there. I also used to live there. I lived there most of my 39 years of life.
Practically my whole family lives there in Texas. My mom and her family live in Deer Park, Texas. That is located in Harris County. There are many storms, tornadoes, and other natural phenomenon that happens out at sea.
There are other reasons why I love the ocean. Another one of those reasons is that when you go into the water and you have some kind of scratch or whatever, you go into the water and the wound stings a little bit, which is okay. I guess it helps the wound heal a little bit.


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Deborah Bauers07/11/05
The ocean is filled with mystery, isn't it? Even when we live close to it, it still holds a bit of intrigue for all of us. Thanks for sharing.
Nina Phillips07/11/05
I believe that you could have actually developed this article, having taken the time into a little bit more of a constructive view.
Still cool!
God bless ya,
littlelight
Phyllis Inniss 07/12/05
The ocean does help our wounds to heal, even a little scratch. There is spiritual healing as well even though some may not realize it and I agree with the writer who says it's full of mystery.
Shari Armstrong 07/12/05
A nice start to something even better! There's some great stuff in there to work with :)
dub W07/14/05
A good start,thanks for posting.
Shannon Redmon07/14/05
I like your thought about the ocean helping to heal our physical wounds. This would be a good topic to focus another piece.