The Official Writing Challenge
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07/11/05
I can actually feel a wave of movement in your prose. I enjoyed reading through it.
God bless ya,
littlelight
07/12/05
Your poem written in free verse allows you a freedom to unwind and put your thoughts on the One on whose chest you can lay your head. Very good entry.
07/12/05
Very nice! I enjoyed reading it.
07/14/05
Wonderful free verse, thank you.
07/14/05
I enjoyed reading this and flowing with it's message. Well done!
07/14/05
Doesn't the ocean conjure up all sorts of images about the Creator. Well done!
Your poem had a nice rhythm. Nice entry!
07/15/05
Ah, to lay my head on His chest, bringing restoration to my soul. Beautifully said.
The choppiness of the words remind me of the tumbling waves!
07/17/05
I liked this for the love and peace and refuge that you described as found when we rest close to His chest. To hear His heartbeat, perhaps? To be so intimate with Him that there can be no mistake as to His will? Thank you for this poem!