The Official Writing Challenge
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08/07/08
A lovely, bittersweet story! I'm kinda glad she kept the cottage, I was hoping she would. Good last lines too! ^_^
Interesing, very interesting.
Wonderful ending. May God keep on blessing!
08/08/08
Read it from beginning to end without hesitation.

I have to know (after the challenge week), is this a true story?

The visual descriptions are awesome, and I could feel true love displayed throughout the story.

EXCELLENT ENTRY! The story will be stuck in my head forever.

May God bless.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship



This sad and bittersweet story sounds too real. I hope the MC isn't you. Good writing; keep on with it.