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07/31/08
An interesting story with a good sense of humor! You have successfully conveyed what it means by a lack of concentration. Your MC in the story is totally distracted! LOL.
08/01/08
I clicked on your entry because the title sounded so peaceful and serene...hee, hee! I found myself right back in my own life.

Cute!

08/01/08
You've used distraction very well to stress on concentration....or the lack of it. Reminds me of my mom, bless her soul.
08/01/08
Cute! What a fun read. I could relate to all these 'distractions'. Nice touch with having it inside a library and wanting to focus on stuff. I liked it. ^_^
09/02/08
Very creative approach - I enjoyed the humor and how you made the point!
01/08/09
Nice article on concen...tra...ment...ally. By the way, who one the game? It was Japan and Belgium playing, wasn't it? And what was that song in the background? By the way, what's for dinner? Please write back as soon as the game is over...is Jones' injury healed enough to play - was he playing in the game or music? Talk to you later, whoever you are. When you find out who you are can you tell me who I am? Tomorrow, maybe.

Thanks bunches,

clyde