The Official Writing Challenge
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08/01/08
Wow, what a busy day! So much going on here, but I loved the child's prayer at the end, with thank you for: so cute! My only note is a typo "peak in on Ben."
Peak is like a mountain top,
Peek is looking in on something. ^_^ Good job!
08/02/08
Thank you so very much! As a mother of three, all home with me, I can empathize with the mother in this story. Her revelation at the end is very encouraging. This story is well written. Great Job!