The Official Writing Challenge
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01/31/05
Great poem!! I think you should look for a publisher. Good luck.
Karen
02/01/05
Thank you for sharing this nice poem .
Yeshua Bless
i love this, very true and a creative description of anger.God Bless You
02/02/05
Yes, "...for with God's love, that anger shall depart." What a beautiful and powerful message AND poem. Thank you and bless you!
02/04/05
I love this line:

Instead of peace that can be easliy found,
by just placing your knees upon the ground.

Thanks for sharing,
I agree with Cheri. Good lines there. God bless you.
This poem lacks the elements that make a good poem such delight and instruction. Anger here is depicted as a bad thing when it's really the second of sound emotional stability. Try again.