The Official Writing Challenge
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07/24/08
I love the repating lines in here, it just adds so much depth to this piece, bringing the reality of the payphone thing to life. I liked it. This is one of my favorites this week. I especially like how it seems there is a lovely, happy ending too. Wonderful writing! ^_^
08/04/08
EXCELLENT PIECE. I PERSONALLY THINK YOU SHOULD HAVE WON!!! I WILL LOOK FOR MORE OF YOUR WORK!!