The Official Writing Challenge
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07/24/08
Love the wordplay in your title! How creative! I was really rooting for the MC and that she'd be able to do something to help someone. This is very unique, I liked the way she got the answering machine and had a recording that encouraged those tormenting her to turn them into friendships. Lovely twist! ^_^
07/31/08
This is excellent! What a great idea Susan had...My only critique would be, put spaces between paragraphs. It makes for easier reading...You have done great, winning second place...Keep writing. This was an enjoyable read...Helen
I so enjoyed your story. Tears were forming when she realized Arrogant Aaron was a believer! How awesome to deliver the lost sheep back to the shepherd. Thanks for reminding us that God has a better answer for all our problems. Good job!
It is always a revelation to us when bad things turn to good through "letting go and letting God." This was a super illustration of that point, and a reminder that we affect our young people more than we know by the way we live our faith. Thanks, and congratulations!