The Official Writing Challenge
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07/24/08
Your title kind of gives the ending away, but the story was good! I wish there'd been a little more detail, I didn't have enough of a chance to get to know these two characters better. Thanks for sharing though-it was good. ^_^
07/27/08
Interesting. It leaves you wanting to know the characters better.