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Quite a twist here! I wasn't expecting Jim to be the assistant pastor! You made his character wonderfully, to see how he tried to inform each member of the sad news, so they wouldn't have to read it in a bulletin. That showed something special. I liked it.
A very touching story. You deserved to win. Congratulations on your third place...I had tears forming in my eyes by the time I got to the end of the story. How unselfish this assistant pastor was to put the feelings of the congregation ahead of his own. Thanks for this well-told story...God bless you...Keep writing...Helen
This is a sad, but tenderly told story. Congratulations!