The Official Writing Challenge
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07/26/08
What a funny story! I can tell you are not from the U.S. because of your choice of words (cut the phone, standing in a queue, etc.) I find it rather interesting, although the use of "bas.." is a bit offensive. Perhaps you could have used something else.

It's funny story. Thank you for writing it.
07/26/08
Your story is very well written. It held my interest to the end.

I did get lost. I had trouble connecting the first part of your story with the second part.

Great job.