The Official Writing Challenge
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WOW! What an incredible message, and written beautifully. Thanks.
07/25/08
Love your characters last names! And the last line is great...with our Bibles and on our knees is the solution to so many situations...I can see the MC's actions in my head and feel his brokenness. Good job!
07/25/08
This is a great message for all of us to heed. I loved it.
07/25/08
I liked this very much. It would make a great church skit.

Keep up the good work.
07/26/08
Well done! I liked the tone of each character in the conversation. I could hear God's patience and Sam's change of heart.
Excellent! **THIS SPARKLES**
07/30/08
Great job on showing what we should be doing to reach others. Good writing.