The Official Writing Challenge
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Very well done! I eas blessed reading your work. Jesus is the best friend we could have. Our Father has given Him to us to comfort and guide us. You communicated that very well! Thank you. Keep up the great work.
07/25/08
Very, very sweet. This is a wonderful piece.

You need to work on tightening up your writing, but you did a fantastic job.
Cute story. Your little Cathy has a big bright smile! God bless you.
07/26/08
Ahhhhh...I love this! The ending was perfect!
** THIS SPARKLES**
"A Little Child shall lead them." Children teach us some of the best lessons in our relationship with the Lord. I enjoyed this keep writing.
Connie, this story is so very wonderful. Thank you for writing this story. I can see you are so blessed by the Lord..

Thanks so much....
I loved this Connie. Thank you for sharing. I could feel the emotions of this little girl. Nicely put.