The Official Writing Challenge
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07/24/08
Ooh -- I like your idea. I only wish you would have expanded it. The title caught my eye because I relate with it.
07/25/08
I learned many years ago that when I wanted very much to receive a particular phone call, I would lay down to take a nap. It never failed, the phone always rang.
07/25/08
Very clever. I think we all can feel your pain.

I'd love to see this developed even more. Instead of listing examples, pull your reader in with anecdotes. The more humorous the better. Also, work on your formatting by breaking up the story.

Good job.

07/26/08
ha..ha...ha... This is so true! You could have used up all 750 words with this train of thought!

Well done! Keep writing.