The Official Writing Challenge
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07/24/08
This is a very nice story.

I did get lost in all the words a few times. You could give this a good edit and still have a great sotry.

Good job.
07/26/08
This is a very interesting story. It seems to be set in another time and place, but it's message is eternal.

The story of Alexander Graham Bell seemed to be writtne differently. Don't try to be like someone else. Write in your own style.

Keep writing.