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07/24/08
What a sweet story. I love the faith the child has.

I was a bit confused by your article. It had 2 seperate thesis sentences. I wasn't sure where you were going, and when we got there, I felt like I had been around the world. Just needs some tightening up to pull things together.

Wonderful little story.
Perhaps you needed to be more overt in quoting James 5:14 and 15:
"Is any sick among you? let him call for the elders of the church ...... and the prayer of faith shall save the sick ..."
It is so wonderful to know that not only is "today" still the day of salvation, but that Jesus deat still brings healing from sickness and disease, and deliverance from all the attacks of the enemy. God bless you.
07/25/08
Isn't it wonderful to see the simple faith of children? Thank you for writing this.