The Official Writing Challenge
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07/18/08
You've well-expressed through your poem the many times in life that memories can come back to us-either to comfort or to bring pain. But the one thing that remains steadfast and true is our reliance on His word and His hope to bring a new day and a new start.
Somber poem, sets the mood strongly. So glad to read the up-lifting ending. Well-written. :)
This is a lovely poem, so many lines to enjoy and treasure. I'm copying it into my favs. Well done!
07/21/08
Wow! This is excellent and seems to be written from heartfelt experience. I can see you are not new to expressing yourself with words. This is a higher level writing for sure. Good job~
07/26/08
As I read your poem, it's like I'm standing on the beach...and each line is like a wave, of time, of memory.
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