The Official Writing Challenge
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07/18/08
Wow, what a memory! I love the emotion in this piece. My only note was the quotation marks were a tad confusing, I couldn't tell if your MC was thinking or talking. Remember to use "quotation marks" for the words and 'these' for the thoughts, or put them in italics. This was a very interesting story, I could see more episodes of granny's memories. ^_^
this was a very moving story with an important message.