The Official Writing Challenge
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07/18/08
Wonderful! I love your poem. And the truth it portrays is so very clear. Let us all recall the things that are pure and forget the things that are corrupt. God gave us selective memory for a purpose. He also gave us a conscience so that He can speak to us about the wrong things in our lives. Then when they are confessed, they are forgiven. God forgets, so so should we..."This I Recall"--God's forgiveness wipes the record clean...Helen (You sound like you should be beyond the "Beginner" level--but who am I to say? Just my opinion, that's all.)

07/18/08
Wonderful! I liked the message in here and the way you wove it within the words. Nice job! ^_^