The Official Writing Challenge
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07/18/08
Yes indeed, because He lives, we CAN face tomorrow. I loved this tender story and I'm glad that though, bittersweet, has a happy ending, sort of. Nice job! ^_^
07/18/08
You took the reader from the happy, to the sad, to the contemplative memories of a prior time, and then back to the happy ending, as a wedding should be...Very good. (Just a hint, if you don't mind a bit of advice--put a space between paragraphs to make reading easier.) Great story, though. Keep writing and God bless you...Helen
07/19/08
A beautiful story.