The Official Writing Challenge
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07/17/08
You have some great lines in here! My only note is that I couldn't break it down into 'verses' unless that's just the format. Nicely done! ^_^
07/21/08
Some very good lines in this poem, but I must agree about a little change in the format (white space) to make it read easier for us old geezers who can't half see!

Also, I'm sure you already know about the typo in the title --REASSURING. (We all have done it. In fact, I have a story in the first ever FW Anthology with a word spelled wrong in the title. I guess that makes us exquisitly human). :0)

Looking forward to reading more of your work~



Congratulations on your first faithwriters entry! I enjoyeed your poem.