The Official Writing Challenge
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07/17/08
This reads like a wonderful little devotional. Nice job, I like the phrase "no big water" and how you turned it into a lesson that I could relate to. ^_^
A very nice story...I can relate---
07/19/08
Great story. It does read like a devotional, one that helped me this morning.

The "No Big Water" is a phrase that sticks and then reminds us of the story and how it relates to faith.

I would just put a space between each paragraph for easier reading. Nice job.