The Official Writing Challenge
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07/17/08
Wow. This is a favorite of mine. What a story, so much emotion and everything, especially with the detail of the dress with a tag on it. You made this whole piece come alive and the verse at the bottom was special for me. Nicely done! ^_^
You did a superbly eloquent job telling your story. It flowed beautifully. You owe it to yourself as such a capable storyteller to proof for small errors. In this case, they did very little to detract from your lovely descriptions. Excellent job!