The Official Writing Challenge
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07/17/08
Hmmm, lots going on here and I'm not sure I follow the ending. I wish there were more words to explain it! I liked the characters and the dialouge, it was pretty good! Nice job. ^_^
07/19/08
You give us a glimpse of the struggle of the elderly and their families and also the way God continues to remind us of commitments we have made. I like it.