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07/17/08
I love this memory! I could see the playhouse and the orchard and everything. You really made it come alive with some great descriptions and real slice of life tidbits. Excellent job! ^_^
07/21/08
Wow. I learned so much from this piece. How interesting that egg whites remove impurities from Maple syrup. You conveyed your childhood memories so well it was like being in that orchard. :0)
07/30/08
Your story makes me wish I could have visited your orchard. It sounds like a special place. Nice job.