The Official Writing Challenge
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07/17/08
Ohh, so sad! You made this real with the emotions from Alice about her mother. I like how reading the bible helped. Nice job! ^_^
Good emotions expressed. Perhaps a space between the paragraphs would make for easier reading. I enjoyed reading it.
Blessings,
Norms
07/18/08
I agree with Norms. A space between paragraphs would be helpful. The account was well written. Thank you for sharing.